吳銓高詩 [詠荷]

[吳銓高]

詠荷
風翻葉浪擁紅蓮 , 焰彩燒晴映碧泉 ,
引息遙知香蕾放 , 凝珠欲滴嫩蓬鮮 ;
藕含通莖銀鱗戲 , 花立蜻蜒君子憐 ;
自愧詩庸污秀質 , 幸能參透個中禪。

[李德儒]

詠荷
風翻葉浪擁紅蓮 , 焰彩燒晴映碧泉 ,
引息遙知香蕾放 , 凝珠欲滴嫩蓬鮮 ;
藕含通莖銀鱗戲 , 花立蜻蜒君子憐 ;
自愧詩庸污秀質 , 幸能參透個中禪。

荷花怕風，風翻葉浪可能不太合適。

[吳銓高]

謝謝詞長提點 , 改為 :

詠荷
微風拂葉醒紅蓮 , 焰彩燒晴映碧泉 ,
引息遙知香蕾放 , 凝珠欲滴嫩蓬鮮 ;
藕含通莖銀鱗戲 , 花立蜻蜒君子憐 ;
自愧詩庸污秀質 , 幸能參透個中禪。

[小發]

妄言數句。
荷花雖畏風，並沒有畏到不能風翻葉浪，荷花葉莖花莖出水甚高，清風襲來，碧波萬頃，花隨風動，葉隨風翻。葉浪擁蓮是挺貼切的形容，微風拂葉就少了些生動，反倒是焰彩燒晴形容稍過。

[吳銓高]

詠荷【原創 : 吳銓高】植物16古韻 [精選]
風翻翠浪擁紅蓮 , 焰彩燒晴映碧泉。引息遙知香蕾放 ; 凝珠欲滴嫩蓬鮮。
藕含通柄銀鱗戲 ; 花立蜻蜓君子憐。自愧詩庸污秀質 , 幸能參透個中禪。

To Chant The Lotus【By Charles Wu】
Shaken by wind, the red lotus is hugged by its leaves.
It casts a flaming shadow which the limpid pond receives.
The fragrance tells the visitors that its bud will bloom.
Dew drops try to peep the seeds in its tender womb.
Fishes play around its stalk and root under water.
Dragon-fly rests on its petal while poet is the watcher.
I fear this poem would stain its beautiful quality.
Its growth from mud makes me think about the truth deeply.

吳銓高 詩情畫意 [詠荷]2------------ [卷E] 884


吳銓高 詩情畫意 [詠荷]1------------ [卷C] 678


輝字吳銓高詩 [詠荷]------------ [卷D] 793


吳銓高 毛筆書法1 [詠荷]--------------- [卷03] 239


吳銓高 毛筆書法2 [詠荷]--------------- [卷33] 901


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