吳銓高詩 [仲冬]

[吳銓高]

仲冬
菊殘霜破柑 , 風凜仲冬臨
嫩竹迎寒翠 , 奇松耀日金
圍爐溫酒飲 , 踏雪把梅尋
窮節微吟動 , 詩翁惜晚陰
註 : 孤雁入群格

[維仁]

〔孤雁入群〕以鄰韻為限。而〔柑 〕字屬十三覃韻，並非十二侵韻之鄰韻。因此首句有必要修改。

[吳銓高]

謝維仁版主提點 , 現改為 :

仲冬
菊殘霜凍侵 , 風凜仲冬臨
嫩竹迎寒翠 , 奇松耀日金
圍爐溫酒飲 , 踏雪把梅尋
窮節微吟動 , 詩翁惜晚陰

[寒钓]

喜歡“嫩竹迎寒翠 , 奇松耀日金”。

吟為吃韻當避之。

[吳銓高]

仲冬【原創 : 吳銓高】人27古韻
菊殘霜早侵 , 風凜仲冬臨。嫩竹迎寒翠 ; 奇松耀日金。
圍爐溫酒飲 ; 踏雪冷梅尋。窮節推敲樂 , 詩翁惜晚陰。

Midwinter【By Charles Wu】
Frost attacks the withered chrysanthemum in the morning.
Cold wind roars to inform that the midwinter is coming.
Bamboo trees are still green welcoming the chilly weather.
The sun shines on the strangely shaped pine looking much browner.
People sit near the stove to warm the wine before drinking.
Stepping on the snow, some enjoy the icy plum blooming.
The merry poet would stay at his home to write poem.
He cherishes the winter time and does not feel lonesome.

吳銓高 詩情畫意 [仲冬]2------------ [卷I] 144


吳銓高 詩情畫意 [仲冬]1------------ [卷B] 447


輝字吳銓高詩 [仲冬]------------ [卷H] 103


吳銓高 毛筆書法 [仲冬]1--------------- [卷05] 064


吳銓高 毛筆書法 [仲冬]2--------------- [卷24] 967


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