學凡 寫:戴金生 寫:對了,應該整理一下
添一首
上平八齊
看圖寫作隨心發,三十平聲韻腳齊。
句句青潭荒野地,篇篇都見馬飛蹄。(Modified)
恭喜金生詞長:大功告成。恭喜!恭喜!![]()
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I should congratulate you too.
It was a great experience.
Thanks to all the masters'
encouragement and helping to pin point the errors.
Only thing I feel sorry it that don't have time
to read more to broad the vocabularies.
That is why I added this last "a little Da You Poem".