吳銓高詩 [春雪]

[吳銓高]

雪梅
峭料似針砭 , 冰風忽入帘
圍爐身始暖 , 呵氣冷猶添
鶴毳飄郊野 , 庭階積白鹽
雪凝梅艷放 , 攢蕊待君瞻

[李德儒]

形容冷的字眼太多。

[吳銓高]

謝版主 , 現改為 :

冬雪
峭料似針砭 , 冰風忽入帘
圍爐身始暖 , 呵氣冷猶添
鶴毳飄郊野 , 庭階積白鹽
天花鋪峻嶺 , 銀海蓋層檐

[李德儒]

峭料似針砭 , 料峭意指春寒，
冰風忽入帘 。冰風又是說寒
圍爐身始暖 ,這句也帶寒意
呵氣冷猶添 。冷又是寒
鶴毳飄郊野 , 鶴毳相信是指雪了
庭階積白鹽 這句又是雪
天花鋪峻嶺 , 峻嶺還鋪雪
銀海蓋層檐。太多雪

這首除了說寒冷外，沒有其他的東西了。

[吳銓高]

春雪【原創 : 吳銓高】物29古韻
料峭似針砭 , 冰風忽入帘。圍爐身始暖 ; 呵氣冷猶添。
郊野成銀海 ; 庭階積白鹽。雪停春已降 , 磨礪鈍耕鐮。

Spring Snow【By Charles Wu】
It’s so cold that people feel as if pierced by needle.
Icy wind carries snow to the window like crystal.
Farmers sit near the fire place to keep themselves warm.
When breathing, they can see air gushing out in smoky form.
The suburb has been changed to be a silver mirror.
Snow accumulates like salt in their front yard corner.
Spring is on its way and snow-flakes will turn to drizzle.
Farming resumes and peasants sharpen their blunt sickle.

吳銓高 詩情畫意 [春雪]------------ [卷 I] 179


輝字吳銓高詩 [春雪]------------ [卷 G] 092


吳銓高 毛筆書法1 [春雪]--------------- [卷05] 065


吳銓高 毛筆書法2 [春雪]--------------- [卷24] 965


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