吳銓高詩 [憶嚴親]

[吳銓高]

憶嚴親
承歡在港尚黃毛 , 小杖當然大杖逃
百感鰥夫徒怨懟 , 無知稚子愛啼號
聞雷受嚇兒呼母 , 借酒消愁淚濺袍
繞膝趨庭情意切 , 此生難以報劬勞

[芬陀利]

詞長此詩情摯意切，孝思深濃，令人感動！

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小小意見
脛聯上下句的意思銜接稍微不順。

[吳銓高]

憶嚴親【原創 : 吳銓高】人19古韻 [精選]
承歡在港尚黃毛 , 小杖甘捱大杖逃。百感鰥夫徒怨懟 ; 無知稚子愛啼號。
挑燈對影心思故 ; 借酒消愁淚濺袍。繞膝趨庭情意切 , 此生何以報劬勞。

To Remember My Father【By Charles Wu】
Living with my father in Hong Kong, I was still a kid.
When he used a big stick to punish me, I hid.
Since the death of my mother, he harboured great sadness.
Dealing with an ignorant child who cried, he was helpless.
He always sat alone at night and sighed about the past.
He drowned his sorrows in liquor as his future could not be forecast.
I consoled him by showing filial obedience.
Never could I pay my debt of gratitude in his presence.

吳銓高 詩情畫意 [憶嚴親]------------ [卷E] 874


輝字吳銓高詩 [憶嚴親]------------ [卷D] 770


吳銓高 毛筆書法1 [憶嚴親]------------- [卷01] 185


吳銓高 毛筆書法2 [憶嚴親]------------- [卷31] 783


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