吳銓高詩 [上元佳節]

[吳銓高]

上元佳節
元宵喜見鳳還巢 , 鼓樂喧天客滿郊。
帶彩花燈飄字句 ; 撩人春月戀松梢。
輝煌火樹天壇射 ; 奇幻激光維港拋。
玉漏停催方夜半 , 詩聯掛網贈知交。

[維仁]

請教首句「鳳還巢」可有特殊含意？此三字與後七句似無連繫。
又，頷聯「字句」對「松梢」，稍感不穩。

[吳銓高]

上元佳節 【原創 : 吳銓高】人18古韻 [精選]
元宵喜見鳳還巢 , 鼓樂喧天客滿郊。帶彩花燈飄謎面 ; 撩人春月戀松梢。
輝煌火樹天壇耀 ; 奇幻激光維港拋。玉漏頻催方夜半 , 詩聯掛網贈知交。

The Lantern Festival【By Charles Wu】
Glad to see phoenix return home on Lantern Festival.
Din of drum and pipe is full of the suburb with people.
Many colourful festive lanterns are pasted with puzzle.
Full moon in spring shines brightly at the tip of pine jungle.
Bright fireworks are displayed above the Temple of Heaven.
Magical laser is emitted from Hong Kong mansion.
The tower clock sounds loudly at mid night to celebrate.
In website, couplets and poems are written by playmate.

吳銓高詩情畫意 [上元佳節]------------ [卷E] 913


輝字吳銓高詩 [上元佳節]------------ [卷 H] 108


吳銓高 毛筆書法1 [上元佳節]---------- [卷01] 182


吳銓高 毛筆書法2 [上元佳節]---------- [卷32] 792


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