吳銓高詩 [觀雁有感]

[吳銓高]

觀雁有感
追陽隨暖向南來 , 落葉金風秋雁回 ,
禽伍橫天排字陣 , 蘆田澤國變蓬萊 ;
暮穿霞綺眠沙渚 , 曉拂雲羅登溟臺 ;
擇土遷居秦可避 , 移民異地盡鴻才。

[卞思]

香港可看到雁阿？真好！

落葉、金風、"秋"雁,意覺重複。
尾聯連想有趣。

[一方]

竊以為首聯﹝追陽隨暖向南來 , 落葉金風秋雁回 ﹞是說雁向南飛去，但一來一回有點混亂。只用其一便可。

[吳銓高]

觀雁有感【原創 : 吳銓高】人10古韻
追陽隨暖向南來 , 寒影清音秋月陪。禽伍橫天排字陣 ; 蘆田澤國變蓬萊。
暮穿霞綺眠沙渚 ; 曉拂雲羅登溟臺。擇土遷居秦可避 , 移民異地盡鴻才。

To Watch The Wild Geese【By Charles Wu】
The wild geese chase the warm sun from north to the south.
Beside the autumn moon, they fly with song in each mouth.
The bird soldiers conquer the sky and line up in good order.
At the sandy fields of the marsh where reeds grow, they gather.
Down from dusk clouds, they sleep at land surrounded by water.
At dawn, the journey starts again higher and farther.
They migrate to foreign place just to avoid the cold weather.
Wise persons do the same to make their living better.


吳銓高 詩情畫意 [觀雁有感]2------------ [卷E] 881


吳銓高 詩情畫意 [觀雁有感]1------------ [卷B] 462


輝字吳銓高詩 [觀雁有感]------------ [卷 A] 381


吳銓高 毛筆書法1 [觀雁有感]--------- [卷02] 219


吳銓高寫楷書詩 [追陽隨暖向南來] [裱]卅五166


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