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中山【原創 : 吳銓高】旅14古韻
孫文再世可心寬 , 今日中山非一般。國富民安生活好 , 僑胞訪舊亦顏歡。
Zhong-shan【By Charles Wu】
To-day, Dr. Sun might put down his big stone in mind.
His hometown, Zhong-shan becomes a city of modern kind.
A strong China makes its people live in comfort and peace.
With smiling faces, overseas Chinese visitors increase.
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輝字吳銓高詩 [中山]------------ [卷22] 652
吳銓高 毛筆書法1 [中山]----------------- [卷09] 675
吳銓高 毛筆書法2 [中山]----------------- [卷33] 893
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