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潤物無聲降小園。和泥催筍露芽根。落紅含怨黏詩屐。滿樹梨花帶淚痕。

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雨後【原創 : 吳銓高】人13古韻
潤物無聲降小園。和泥催筍露芽根。落紅含怨黏詩屐。滿樹梨花帶淚痕。

After Rain【By Charles Wu】
The rain moistens all plants silently in my small garden.
With wet mud, it helps bamboo shoots to grow all a sudden.
Fallen flowers stuck to my clogs make a queer weeping sound.
Tear stains appear on blossoms of the pear trees all around.

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